Why Teachers Struggle with College Essay Feedback
It's not their fault. Most teachers are trained to evaluate academic writing, not personal statements. College essays require different skills—and most teachers haven't read hundreds of successful (and unsuccessful) admissions essays.
They're Not Admissions Experts
Knowing what makes good academic writing is different from knowing what admissions officers look for.
They Don't Want to Hurt Your Feelings
Teachers who know you may soften criticism to be supportive. Kind, but not helpful.
They're Overloaded
With hundreds of students, they may not have time to give detailed, thoughtful feedback on personal essays.
How to Get Better Feedback (From Anyone)
Ask specific questions instead of "What do you think?"
"What's the main thing you learned about me?"
If they can't answer clearly, your essay isn't communicating effectively.
"Where did you get bored or confused?"
Identifies weak spots even if they can't explain why.
"Does this sound like me talking?"
Checks if your voice is authentic or too formal.
"What would make this more memorable?"
Pushes them to think critically rather than just approve.
Better Sources for Essay Feedback
Professional Essay Review Services
Reviewers who've read thousands of essays and know what works. Worth the investment for your main Common App essay.
Recent College Students
Someone who went through the process recently (1-3 years ago) often gives better feedback than adults who applied decades ago.
Someone Who Doesn't Know You
Fresh eyes without context can tell you if your essay makes sense on its own—the way an admissions officer will read it.
Warning: Too Many Cooks
Don't ask 10 people. Conflicting advice will confuse you. Get 2-3 quality opinions, then make your own decisions.